and You Think You are Confused . . .

29 Apr

Many months ago I participated in Haiku-Heights month-long challenge – to write and post a haiku every day for a month.  On day 31 I found myself at Haiku-Low and never thought I’d write another haiku again.

As usual I rarely listen to myself . . . . couldn’t resist this prompt = “clarity”
     Clarity is clear
     If you want obfuscation
     Obscure clear intent

If you don’t know what a haiku is here’s the explanation from Haiku-Heights.

  • “Haiku is Japanese poetry form that has three meaningful lines which are complete and reflecting nature.
  • Haiku have syllabic limitations as well. A traditional one has eleven or seventeen syllables, in a strict 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 format.”

“We (Haiku-Heights) wish to celebrate the haikai forms through your words. Some poets are straying away from the Haiku format so kindly stay within the Haiku limitations. I know it is difficult but very challenging too!!”

Now, it’s possible that Haiku-Heights might think I’ve strayed but I want to assure Leo that my haiku reflects nature – the nature of man and is VERY meaningful . . . to me.

P.S.  I suspect that Leo who hosts Haiku-Heights has figured out it’s best just to humor me hoping that one day I might turn into a more serious poet.

Thank you Leo.

4 Responses to “and You Think You are Confused . . .”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher April 29, 2012 at 7:51 pm #

    Now, really, why would you even entertain the notion of being serious some day? :)

    A haibun, Honey for My Soul

    • MentalMakeovers April 30, 2012 at 3:35 am #

      Entertain the notion of being serious? Probably an illusion, er delusion . . . I’m found of both.

  2. Carol L McKenna (@artmusedog) April 29, 2012 at 1:13 pm #

    LOL ~ does get a little wearisome ~ Great haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

    • MentalMakeovers April 30, 2012 at 3:43 am #

      A haiku a day
      Gets a little wearisome
      Can’t count anymore.

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