Can’t you see that I’m . . . Reversed Engineered?

26 Jan

David http://wordcoaster.wordpress.com* has enhanced the traditional haiku form. These 3 haiku are dedicated to him. (Well, the first one isn’t a haiku, it’s a plea, the second & third ones are Reversed-Engineered.

Come on baby

Rescue me

from myself

What are REVERSED-ENGINEERED Haiku?

Here’s David’s REVERSED-ENGINEERED “haiku” directions.   I quote:

 ”I think perhaps a “reverse-engineered haiku” (if it really WAS a form) would perhaps be three lines of 7-5-7 syllables? Or maybe would be written backwards? Hmm…might have to try one of those out.” David

David, here’s an attempt at the two forms of Reverse-Engineered Haiku YOU inspired:

Rewind, re-verse my per-verse

broken haiku form.

Rescue me creatively

*   *   *

All fault David for

haiku engineered reverse.

For it’s David’s fault*

P.S. David is obviously “prone” to cheating . . . . or as he says, enhancing . . . as EVIDENCED by his bio on his very own blog:

*My name is David.  I was born and raised in Baltimore, MD.  I have three wonderful sisters and two amazing parents.   Currently I am studying Community Development at Covenant College in Lookout Mountain, GA.  I love to read poetry and I also love to write poetry, though like most people I’ve never been formally trained.  I also like the tone a photograph can set for an entire poem–the emphasis it can add or the spin it can give.  Some would say it’s cheating–I say it’s enhancing.

20 Responses to “Can’t you see that I’m . . . Reversed Engineered?”

  1. wordcoaster February 2, 2013 at 8:56 pm #

    Can’t believe I’m just now finding this! These are awesome; you’re awesome. I am smiling so wide you’d think I was the Cheshire cat. :D I’m a bit behind on my enhancing/cheating format. Once I find a lull in my schedule, perhaps pictures will again start appearing with my poems. :)

    • CuriositytotheMax February 2, 2013 at 10:27 pm #

      Wordcoaster David,
      I was wondering if you were simply in shock, mortified by seeing yourself quoted, or hiding in a dark room hoping the paparazzi would give up and go looking for Brad and Angelina.
      Get going – your enhancing, er cheating, er waxing poetic is missed. I know because based on my stats page you are getting hits from my post! People WANT TO KNOW who inspired me.

      • wordcoaster February 3, 2013 at 10:14 pm #

        Ok, tomorrow I promise I will post a reverse-engineered haiku (and will definitely give you a link back). Thanks so much! :)

  2. phylor January 30, 2013 at 1:44 am #

    Made it to the end of the post without a freeze! Since I’m absolutely horrible at haikus, as you know, perhaps I’ll do better with the reverse engineered variety!

  3. ElizOF January 28, 2013 at 9:58 pm #

    What a riot… so many of us need rescuing form ourselves. Love that! :lol:

  4. Susan January 28, 2013 at 3:58 am #

    Fun. Your rebellion may be lost in the universality of your message.

    • CuriositytotheMax January 28, 2013 at 5:21 pm #

      Susan,
      Your comment REALLY made me think about what I say, how I say it and why I say it.

      I hope my rebellion in itself is a universal message to:
      1. Think for ourselves
      2. Look beyond the obvious
      3. Take steps beyond what’s become comfortable & “socially accepted”
      4. Be able to smile at our human antics and foibles
      5. Understand that we are all connected

      Susan! Thank YOU for helping ME do what I wish for others too!

  5. Hazel Anastasia January 28, 2013 at 1:11 am #

    “Reverse my perverse” -that’s clever!

  6. odyzz January 27, 2013 at 12:42 pm #

    Hi Judy,
    How are you doing?
    aah!! Reverse engineered haiku- Wow !! Mind boggling..You do it so well in your own unique way everytime…Loved it…

  7. devji (@debu7018) January 27, 2013 at 12:24 pm #

    Would have tripped on Tracy chapman…for my rescue..

  8. itsmeenakshi77 January 27, 2013 at 10:29 am #

    That seems to be interesting and you did it wonderfully. I would like to try it.

    Lord’s Play

  9. Rallentanda January 27, 2013 at 8:35 am #

    Reverse is a novel idea but I like your first one.

  10. kaykuala January 27, 2013 at 3:19 am #

    Reversed-Engineered haiku

    An enhanced haiku form, how interesting, Judith! Must try it some time later. Thanks for sharing! Nicely!

    Hank

  11. WabiSabi January 26, 2013 at 10:40 pm #

    I don’t know how you do it
    every single week
    You rescue HH with laughs!!

    • CuriositytotheMax January 27, 2013 at 1:31 am #

      Wabi!!!!! Sabi!!!!!
      Welcome to the Reversed Engineered Haiku Club!

      You wrote a winning haiku
      The engineered kind
      WabiSabi is genus!

  12. Anthony North January 26, 2013 at 6:57 pm #

    Reverse engineered haiku. I like it.

  13. readinpleasure January 26, 2013 at 6:14 pm #

    Brilliant, Judith.

  14. Rick January 26, 2013 at 6:13 pm #

    I would call David’s format a “haiku coup”, or perhaps a”ku” for short…

    • Gemma Wiseman January 26, 2013 at 7:54 pm #

      Some thoughts for thought here on the usual haiku spin!

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