Pride

2 Feb
judy's journal

judy’s journal

Five-Parts Pride

Too proud to admit

loneliness; just me, my soul

neither here nor there.

* * *

Too proud to complain.

How to relinquish the pain

I am and am not

* * *

Humility bared

ere I go before the fall

haughty spirit stilled

* * *

What was, now is 

 pile of dead bones

and my soul

“Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall”. Proverbs 16:18

Deepest depths

laughter and pain

 all I am

Haiku-Heightsprompt, Pain

Haiku-Heights
prompt, PRIDE

13 Responses to “Pride”

  1. magicalmysticalteacher February 8, 2013 at 10:47 pm #

    “Too proud to complain”

    Not my grandma! I remember sitting in her kitchen as a child, when when Whitey, one of her long-time friends came to the door. “How ya doin’, Ann?” he boomed. Immediately my grandmother launched into a long litany of woes, mostly involving aches and pains. Nope, she wasn’t too proud to complain!

    No Pride of Lions

  2. ElizOF February 6, 2013 at 11:23 am #

    Wonderful contribution… and I can relate. ;-)
    Eliz

  3. Reshma February 4, 2013 at 11:46 pm #

    Pride humbles one and all. Fabulous Haiku!!

  4. aeeda (@aaida) February 4, 2013 at 5:42 am #

    extraordinaire
    haiku bold colored journal
    pride and humility

    • CuriositytotheMax February 4, 2013 at 6:11 am #

      Ida,
      I would slightly edit your haiku:

      Extraordinaire
      Ida: Blend of bold,
      pride and humility

  5. siggiofmaine February 4, 2013 at 2:09 am #

    “Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall”. Proverbs 16:18
    That was my first thought when I saw the prompt.
    My pride in Haiku is still waiting to come out…
    you said a lot that hit home…
    thanks,
    Pride certainly has ruled my life…
    Thanks for the eye opener.
    Peace
    Siggi

  6. itsmeenakshi77 February 3, 2013 at 8:04 am #

    very meaningful, wise, I could relate to it.

  7. mo February 3, 2013 at 5:58 am #

    l o v e !!

  8. WabiSabi February 3, 2013 at 3:33 am #

    I loved this set – it is a meditation on humility and independence too. I was very moved by the verse ‘what was, is a pile of dead bones, and my soul.’

  9. Rallentanda February 3, 2013 at 2:26 am #

    I love all of these. Pride can show courage as well. It is not always foolish.

  10. Anthony North February 2, 2013 at 8:46 pm #

    Great depth in your haiku.

  11. hibernationnow.wordpress.com February 2, 2013 at 8:41 pm #

    Wonderfully tender and open, I just posted mine and came back here. There’s no blood in mine, just a couple of tears. We really are related. Talk about PRIDE, Love, as always, Peachy Keen Jr.

    • vivinfrance February 4, 2013 at 7:51 am #

      I think there is more admirable humility in these than pride!

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