Friendship

Dear Leo,

I read this on your blog: http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/
“The form of poetry here is the Senryu. A senryu is a three line verse, originating in Japan, that deals with emotions rather than nature. It is similar to the haiku, and has a 5 – 7 – 5 syllabic format.”
 
Senryu
Syllabic format
The word Senryu two or three?
Emotions are me
Eliminate any
Two and a half syllables
A half too many

Not easy to do
Senryu, Senryu, is five
How’s that for Haiku?

 
Lickingly, LLLLLLLLLLLLL
The MAX
 
 P.S. Friendship Haiku
 
  Humans – my best friends
   Humans have money for treats
   I love treats to eat
 
  Haiku Heights – so so
  Haiku Heights no dough for treats
  Haikus can’t be eat
 

14 comments on “Friendship

    • Dear My BEST friend Lydia,
      You said it! You are the BEST and so is your Maxaiku.
      LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
      (The kisses are dry cuz my Human won’t let anything wet near her laptop)
      Max

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