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Aug72011
Friendship
Dear Leo,
I read this on your blog:http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/
“The form of poetry here is the Senryu. A senryu is a three line verse, originating in Japan, that deals with emotions rather than nature. It is similar to the haiku, and has a 5 – 7 – 5 syllabic format.”
SenryuSyllabic format The word Senryu two or three? Emotions are meEliminate any Two and a half syllables A half too many
Not easy to do Senryu, Senryu, is five How’s that for Haiku?
Lickingly, LLLLLLLLLLLLL
The MAX
P.S. Friendship Haiku
Humans – my best friends Humans have money for treats I love treats to eat Haiku Heights – so so Haiku Heights no dough for treats Haikus can’t be eat
Dear My BEST friend Lydia,
You said it! You are the BEST and so is your Maxaiku.
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
(The kisses are dry cuz my Human won’t let anything wet near her laptop)
Max
Dear Leo,
CURIOUS to the MAX 
Loyalty and love
the heart and soul of the dog
big sloppy wet kisses
Good boy, Max!
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Dear My BEST friend Lydia,
You said it! You are the BEST and so is your Maxaiku.
LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
(The kisses are dry cuz my Human won’t let anything wet near her laptop)
Max
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I can just see those little mouths salivating, waiting for their treats!
Friends Forever
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Dear My NEW best friend Magical,
Waiting for my treats
Like the belly of the beast
causes all to growl
Lickingly yours, LLLLLLLLLLLLL
The MAX
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Very entertaining writing. Thanks for lightening the day!
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Charles,
Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment! Hopefully what lightens my days, lightens yours too!
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what a tickle to see you in.
wow.
amazing creativity.
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A tickle from you!
such a compliment to me
new at this you see.
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Haha, enjoyed your humor on this one. For me Senryu has 2.5 syllables (so I will likely never use it in its own form)
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Eliminate one
Two and a half syllables
A half too many
Not easy to do
Senryu, Senryu, is five
How’s that for Haiku?
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Thanks for posting this both here and on my blog– a double dose of awesome 😀
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Humans love to provide treats to our beloved fur-children and their fur friends!! 🙂
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Dear My Best Friend Becca,
I am beloved, aren’t I!
Belovedly yours,
The Max
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:D!!! ♥♥♥
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