WabiSabi,
bad news/good news!!!!! Love it. Finally in old age I’m sin free.
I can now focus on what sins I didn’t forget or what sins I don’t remember, or if I remember what sins I forgot or forgetting to remember what sins I forgot or if I remember the sins I forgot before I forget to remember . . . sorry can’t remember what my point was or if I had a point to remember . . . just forget it!
I never thought about sin quite like these hiaku. Good work. Thought provoking.If you’re already done one or two, you may as well enjoy the whole set. 😉
The bad news about getting older …forgetfulness. The good news…. forgetting one’s sins!!! Love your ever exuberant take on the prompt!
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WabiSabi,
bad news/good news!!!!! Love it. Finally in old age I’m sin free.
I can now focus on what sins I didn’t forget or what sins I don’t remember, or if I remember what sins I forgot or forgetting to remember what sins I forgot or if I remember the sins I forgot before I forget to remember . . . sorry can’t remember what my point was or if I had a point to remember . . . just forget it!
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Has anyone (that you know of) actually done this?
Seven Fathoms Deep
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Readers????????? Anyone willing to tell-all to Magical Mystical Teacher (ANONYMOUSLY of course)?
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Very nicely woven..loved the first one..
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Cannot remember what they all are. Must google to see how many I have committed:)
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Rallentanda,
Be care when you google so you don’t leave a permanent cyber trail of your “committments”
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PS
Your friend has very nice American teeth:)
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I LOVE this! It is unique and clever.
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Superbly done Judith, just loved the first one…
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I never thought about sin quite like these hiaku. Good work. Thought provoking.If you’re already done one or two, you may as well enjoy the whole set. 😉
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Good haiku. Why is the picture a sin? It’s a beautiful smile. I thought the eigth deadly sin was to be found out!
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It would be a kind of eighth sin for me to leave this page without comment Judy… beautiful haiku…
RS
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Can you paraphrase a haiku?
Seven Deadly Sins.
Every one could be joy,
or means to an end.
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Entertaining perspectives of the seven prompt.
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