Hooked on Haiku – prompt DECLINE

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   magicalmysticalteacher July 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   Please also consider linking your poem at Haiku My Heart. We look forward to your presence in our community. Thanks so much!

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   Mark M. Redfearn July 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   For some reason, I want to substitute “or” for “and.” Am I missing something?

   Down a Steep Decline

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     CuriositytotheMax July 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

     Mark,
     I understand the inclination to substitute “or” for “and you will perish”. As I see it, growing old (talking about our physical, not spiritual, body) is the only thing that keeps us alive.

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   jazzytower June 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   Yep. We all participate whether we want to or not.

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   readinpleasure June 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   It creeps on slowly but surely🙂

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   menons129 June 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   No one can decline old age. Nice Haiku.

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   Leonas Lines June 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   I am growing old in age–but not in mind or heart–each new day is an invitation to live and learn!

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   Ramesh Sood June 9, 2014 at 8:10 p #

   Not everyone is lucky to experience growing old in a world where uncertainty prevails… We must accept this invitation by staying young at heart..

   Thanks Judy for your🙂 X4 .. I like this new way of expressing very much…

   RS:)

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