May 5 2015 A prayer, a plea and a promise May heavenly rain water the hearts of mankind with loving-kindness * * * Flotsam of our past it’s water under the bridge Wave from river banks * * * Washed away through tears Cleansed through the sweat of our brow human suffering * * * Haiku Horizons – prompt WATER PLEASE share this! Click here!:EmailPinterestFacebookTwitterLinkedInTumblrRedditPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related
Very beautiful..love the interconnection. The imagery of the last lines linger in in the mind. LikeLike Reply
The haiku on promise is too good. “cleansed through the sweat of our brow”. loved this line. LikeLike Reply
Looks like I’m starting in the middle of the alphabet and working my way “out”. Missed you in the critique group – hope you’re having a great trip LikeLike Reply
Very beautiful..love the interconnection. The imagery of the last lines linger in in the mind.
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Anjali,
Thank you for your lovely comments!
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Profound…
do read mine here: http://drishti.co/2015/05/04/water/
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They are all beautifully profound !
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Very touching. Loved it! 🙂
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B. B.B.,
Glad you liked it – touching is such a nice compliment, thanks!
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The haiku on promise is too good. “cleansed through the sweat of our brow”. loved this line.
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Thank you so much for your comment on the “promise haiku”! It’s my favorite too.
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You’re still in an AtoZ frame of mind, hunh? P is the letter of the day. Well done!
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Looks like I’m starting in the middle of the alphabet and working my way “out”. Missed you in the critique group – hope you’re having a great trip
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Very moving
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