May heavenly rain
water the hearts of mankind
with loving-kindness
* * *
Flotsam of our past
it’s water under the bridge
Wave from river banks
* * *
Washed away through tears
Cleansed through the sweat of our brow
human suffering
* * *
May
5
2015
Very beautiful..love the interconnection. The imagery of the last lines linger in in the mind.
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Anjali,
Thank you for your lovely comments!
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Profound…
do read mine here: http://drishti.co/2015/05/04/water/
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They are all beautifully profound !
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Very touching. Loved it! 🙂
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B. B.B.,
Glad you liked it – touching is such a nice compliment, thanks!
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The haiku on promise is too good. “cleansed through the sweat of our brow”. loved this line.
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Thank you so much for your comment on the “promise haiku”! It’s my favorite too.
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You’re still in an AtoZ frame of mind, hunh? P is the letter of the day. Well done!
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Looks like I’m starting in the middle of the alphabet and working my way “out”. Missed you in the critique group – hope you’re having a great trip
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Very moving
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