Flawed Fleas by Max

I’ve reposted several of Becca Givens’ haikus.  Becca created another memorable vision in the elegant haiku form:

Goal of Perfection

Goal of perfection
Flawed, disenchanted burden
Precious time wasted

by Becca Givens   http://beccagivens.wordpress.com

I read her haikus regularly. Today, for the first time, I clicked on the link on her blog and came upon ANOTHER blog

Haiku Heights

http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com – which gives out word prompts for haikus.

Sounded like fun so I tried my “hand” at the new haiku prompt FLAW

And Max tried his “paw” too!

Perfection no flaws
Nothing more and nothing less
Can’t tinker with God

by Judy

Flawed Fleas by MAX

Lick their little lips

When taking a bite of me

Flawed and hungry fleas

Try it yourself!

  1. First line 5 syllables
  2. Second line 7 syllables
  3. Third line 5 syllables.